I have a close friend in my classroom whose name is Rahayu Oktaviani. I usually call her Ayu, she lives in East Bekasi . I have been close to her since first grade in UHAMKA. There are many reasons that I love to be her close friend . firstly, Ayu is interesting girl for me because Ayu is a friendly and funny girl. secondly, sometimes Ayu likes to make joke with me and all her friends that make us laugh because of her joke. And the last, She has many friends in campus because Ayu is a good listener, sometimes I always sharing to her about my problems or anything else about my life. She is really a good listener, she gives me some advices so that I can smile again. Then, I can say that Ayu is Interesting girl because she could be a good friend for me. Finally, I glad to have a friend like her.
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I have a close friend in my classroom whose name is Rahayu Oktaviani = Topic Sentence
a close friend in my classroom = Topic
Rahayu Oktaviani = Controlling Idea
well, I commented ur writing 3 days ago, for sure. When I again check it, my comment disappears. Nice writing as u stated ur TS clearly, and u tried 2 use transition signal too:-). However, u still have to pay a heed to the use punctuation, singular and plural noun, grammar, the rule of parts of speech and the use of different types of sentence. Nice effort.
BalasHapusbefore it, I say sorry to Mrs.Fika, then thanks a lot for your comment. and I'll try to mind my step for my mistakes in this writing to be better in the next writing :)
BalasHapus